After wandering around town in a daze , this is my retort to today’s critique :
Now for dinner…
One Seeks the Sublime with Meatiness…
After wandering around town in a daze , this is my retort to today’s critique :
Now for dinner…
Boondocks Babylon 
It’s certainly juicy and raw, as well! And I like it!!
I like this direction you’ve taken, maybe impulse works in your favor.
Fab, I hope you’re going to show them, then roll it up and fuck them with it 😉 but seriously, it’s full of fire and energy, although I don’t think your rage is purile, it’s quite reasonable, so let ’em have it.